More reprints from my editorials for the Harry Potter fan site MuggleNet...
Many experienced writers would agree that a key cause of writers block is the problem of how to begin their story. One mistake that many beginning and amateur writers make is to insist on starting at the beginning and writing straight through, whether it be a novel or a short story, a symphony or a research paper. When the perfect opening, or the way into the subject matter, does not immediately present itself, they are paralyzed.
Professional, working writers, on the other hand, often write their works in pieces, all out of order; then they collate the parts together, insert transitional passages. It may not be until the very end that they craft an opening sentence or paragraph or chapter to fit the all-but-completed work. This is certainly how the most prolific authors and musical composers have worked those people who can say "I write so many words or pages per day" whether or not those pages end up being part of the finished work, or completely rewritten many times. This is also apparently how J.K. Rowling writes.
JKR has admitted to wrestling with the opening chapters of some of her books, often rewriting or rethinking what she had earlier planned to do. Clearly, the first chapters of her books serve as more than just a departure point, from which everything follows. Each first chapter was crafted to begin the book in such a way that we would be pulled in and compelled to accompany Harry on each of his perilous journeys. Ms. Rowlings first chapters hook us with tension, humor, mystery, sympathy, surprise, and most importantly, the wonderful magic that fires our imaginations.
The First "First Chapter": "The Boy Who Lived"
I would submit that the first Harry Potter book, Philosophers/Sorcerers Stone, has not one but two first chapters. The first two chapters both serve the purpose of getting us into the action, each in a different way. Perhaps chapter 1, The Boy Who Lived, could be viewed as a prologue to the book, or even to the whole series. Nevertheless, what we may forget around the twelfth re-reading is that The Boy Who Lived does everything a first chapter should do, and does it perfectly.
I call it a prologue, rather than a real chapter 1, for several reasons. First, The Boy Who Lived is one of those few chapters in which the point-of-view does not stick limpet-like to Harry himself. Second, though it does contain details that will be good to know later on, this chapter is not strictly necessary to the structure of the book. PS/SS could have easily started with the chapter titled The Vanishing Glass with hardly any loss to the narrative as such. Third, The Boy Who Lived explains the background of the story, rather than setting events in motion. Much of that background is repeated later in the book, in a different form.
Nevertheless, I would never say that The Boy Who Lived is an unnecessary chapter. The background that it establishes is vital to understanding, and accepting, the things that Hagrid, Dumbledore, and other characters reveal later in the book and the series as a whole. Having this chapter up front creates a kind of first-person memory of the night Harry became an orphan, validating or clashing with things Harry hears and experiences later (such as the sneers of Lord Voldemort, or the hallucinations caused by the dementors).
But the most important reason Book One must start with this chapter that, breaking the pattern of all the other books, does not actually take place in Year One, is that it casts a spell over the reader, leading us irresistably onward.
The Boy Who Lived opens the series by depicting the polar opposite of the magical world where Harry belongs: the Dursley home. In their zeal for being normal, the Dursleys have gone so far from being magical as to become abnormal. In their studiedly bland, suburban lifestyle they are not just ordinary, but grotesquely common. Their ill-natured, self-conscious abstention from all things odd and magical makes them appear, by contrast, twisted and unwholesome. By opening with a portrait of the Dursleys, JKR immediately prepares us to wish for, and believe in, something magical.
Already in the very first pages of the book, the world of magic is positioned as the healthy, normal alternative to the unpleasantness of Dursleyism. So when the first hints of magic show up in about paragraph 5, we greet them with a thrill of joyful recognition. First comes the glimpse of an owl (not seen by the Dursleys). Then, a few lines later, Mr. Dursley spots a cat reading a map. Even with evidence of magic before his eyes, Dursley remains true to his nature and dismisses what he has seen.
The tickly, goose-pimply tension builds as Dursley goes through his day. We see people in robes, more owls in broad daylight, the whispers about Harry Potter, and a collision with a wizard I like to think of as Dedalus Diggle. Then the cat turns up again (and gives Dursley a stern look). The crescendo continues through the evening news and peaks with Dursley reaching the conclusion that the Harry Potter he had heard about earlier was, indeed, his wifes nephew.
Then the curtain is pulled aside and we see the magic world behind it all. Away with tantalizing glimpses! Now we meet Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Hagrid, and we hear for the first time about Voldemort. After meeting the Dursleys, you sympathize with the grief these wizards feel in leaving young Harry on their doorstep. We have seen a put-outer, a giant on a flying motorcycle, and an animal-human transformation. We have heard mention of the difference between wizards and Muggles, the fate of Harrys parents, what Voldemort did to Harrys parents, and what he tried and failed to do to Harry. We have seen that while wizards and witches vary in temperament from the reckless Diggle to the stiffly upright McGonagall, the good ones at least have sympathetic hearts (Hagrid in particular) and, in Dumbledores case, a streak of humor and wit. We have learned enough about the magical world to guess that something very special is in store for the boy who lived but little enough that the chapters ending is as mysterious as it is touching. And there it is: a first chapter that does everything a book needs its first chapter to do!
The Other First Chapter: "The Vanishing Glass"
I think there could an interesting experiment in handing some first-time readers a version of PS/SS that begins with Chapter Two, The Vanishing Glass. I have a hunch that they would be quite engaged, and would miss very little of the real first chapter. This is because The Vanishing Glass also does many of the things a first chapter should do. Plus, it is really the beginning of Harrys seven-year journey.
This is the chapter that establishes Harry as a sort of Cinderfella who is despised at home, even though we already know that he is admired by many people he has never heard of. This is the chapter where we learn that Harry doesnt even know hes a wizard.
JKR cleverly pays out the information about the way Harry lives at the Dursleys house. We first learn that they dont take pictures of him or dote on him, as they do with their son Dudley. Aunt Petunias shrillness is completely out of character with the picture of domestic peace and affection that the pictures in their living room gives. Nearly two pages go by before we learn that Harrys bedroom is the cupboard under the stairs, but by then we are prepared to believe any injustice the Dursleys might perpetrate against Harry.
The contrast between the way the Dursleys treat the bloated, spoiled Dudley and poor Harry is so extreme that, once again, the point is made: the Dursleys are not merely living without magic, but in a willful rejection of magic that transforms their ordinariness into something sick and wrong. As JKR will continue to make clear throughout the series, the source of Harrys misery at home is not that he lives with Muggles, but that the particular Muggles he lives with take their intolerance to the point of paranoia.
But up to this point, Harry doesnt even know that magic exists. The events of this chapter and the handful of chapters that follow it gradually reveal to Harry his own nature, and the nature of the world in which he belongs. But at the stage of The Vanishing Glass, Harry is understandably miserable and confused. He is starting to notice things that do not fit into the worldview the Dursleys have brutally pounded into him. And the only way he can explain to himself why the Dursleys mistreat him, is to implicitly believe that anything different about him must be bad.
The trip to the zoo epitomizes this. For no apparent reason Harry is threatened, yelled at, nearly deprived of the zoo trip and the ice cream treat, and generally shown to be deprived, distrusted, and desperately lonely. So instead of being sinister, Harrys conversation with the Brazilian boa constrictor comes as a ray of comfort, sparkling with mischievous fun. It even seems to be worth the punishment he suffers for it (that, and the disappearing glass, of course). Why? Because it gets Harry thinking about what he is, what the snake incident and other portents might mean, and what is really different about him. The chapter leaves Harry thinking about his loneliness and his (so far disappointed) fantasies of something better coming his way. So it prepares him for the magical news that, over the next couple of chapters, will be maddeningly withheld from him and finally (after its magical nature has become so obvious that there is no point hiding it any longer) revealed.
Chapter Two of PS/SS carries out many of the essential tasks of a good first chapter. Its ending, however, is unusually low-key and ineffective, as JKRs chapter-endings go. In fact, it almost seems as if JKRs train of thought ran off the tracks here, or as if it was meant to continue without a break into the next chapter, until something else was inserted. Someday, perhaps, high-level scholars will unpick the seams where JKR stitched things together, and show us the different pieces she wrote and the connecting parts she added to hold them in place. Until then, Ill just say that Chapter Two is a first chapter that, in its final form, demanded the better and more perfect first chapter that now precedes it.
Second Book, First Chapter: "The Worst Birthday"
In her very next book, Ms. Rowling earned another perfect 10 in the category of First Chapter. Chamber of Secrets opens with the chapter titled The Worst Birthday, which charges directly into the absurd, whimsical territory where the world of magic and the Muggle world intersect. Instead of building slowly to the discovery of magic in modern-day suburbia, JKR smacks us in the face with it, jolting the unprepared reader in the first two paragraphs with the bizarre fact that Harry Potter has an owl in his bedroom.
A page later, the explosion resulting from the phrase Youve forgotten the magic word re-establishes the baseline of the non-magical side of Harrys life, in which the Dursleys pathological hatred of magic comes into focus. Shortly afterward come the two paragraphs that tell everyone who read PS/SS what they already know, and that let any other readers in on the joke: Harry isnt a normal boy. Hes a wizard!
Cue a page and a half of tightly worded re-exposition, making sure that anyone who has forgotten Book One, or skipped it entirely, can follow whats going on. Now I understand that some people find all the bits, where JKR reviews what happened in the previous books, to be unnecessary and tiresome. However, I think this is an essential part of her storytelling genius. In a few words, appropriate to Harrys situation in the new story and quite entertaining in their own way, JKR makes sure we know the very stuff we would be scratching our heads over if she hadnt told us. Ive read at least one series in which the author did not do this, and when there was a gap of months or years between the books (during which I read many other things), it was more than I could do to recall the background from the previous book. This seriously affected my ability to enjoy the new book. JKR not only avoids this problem, but she swiftly re-establishes the magical world of PS/SS in these crucial, early paragraphs of CoS.
Then Vernon gets Harrys hopes up by saying something about today being a very important day. Harrys hopes rise, then collapse again as it turns out Vernon is referring to the dinner party with the Masons. Here we see depicted, once again, the extreme disparity between Dudley and Harry in their treatment by the Dursleys: the one blindly indulged, the other cruelly put down. Only after a scene of inspired absurdity, in which the Dursleys rehearse their dinner plans, do we find out what Harry was hoping to hear about this very special day: Happy birthday to me... Sympathy kicks in. Then another bit of re-exposition, followed by the creepy mystery and sense of foreboding that begins when Harry notices the hedge staring back at him.
Pathos and black humor wind the chapter up to its final, unexplained surprise: when Harry enters his bedroom, someone is already there. And with that, we are hooked for another new adventure!
Book Three, Chapter One: "Owl Post"
A browse through the Table of Contents of Prisoner of Azkaban shows that the first chapter, Owl Post, is intentionally book-ended with the last chapter, titled Owl Post Again. So now, in case any of us have missed the clues so far, we have solid evidence that this book is part of a continuing series. And now, in yet another inspired First Chapter, JKR launches directly into Harrys life on the borderline between Muggles and magic. In the very first paragraph, she reveals several whimsical, unusual things about Harry, concluding with the observation that he also happened to be a wizard.
Every time I re-read this series, it is this first paragraph of Book Three that always strikes me as the series most perfect opening. I cant help but grin when I read it. The next few paragraphs then proceed to put flesh on the bones of Harrys very unusual situation. Like many ordinary children, we find him reading by flashlight under his covers at night. But what hes reading is school work and magical school work at that.
Soon afterward, we are told that Harrys foster parents have a very medieval attitude toward magic, in interesting description that delivers a ton of information in the briefest terms. Then comes the obligatory first-chapter re-exposition of things established in previous books, only this time it is ingeniously mixed with humorous anecdotes such as Rons attempt to reach Harry by phone, and the uselessness of the owl named Errol. The package of birthday letters and presents combines a bit of backstory with foreshadowing of things to come (such as the Sneakoscope, and the Monster Book of Monsters). Looking both backward and forward, combining humor and sympathy for Harrys tiresome situation, the chapter completes its mission with the third-year Hogwarts letter, awakening anticipation and tension (how will Harry get the Dursleys to sign his permission slip?), and closing with a remark about Harry being like any other boy his age completing a circle with the start of the chapter. Brava!
Book Four, Chapter One: "The Riddle House"
The first chapter of Goblet of Fire, titled The Riddle House, ventures into new territory by adopting the point of view of a different character: the ill-fated Muggle named Frank Bryce. Certainly, in the final sentence of the chapter, it turns out that Harry Potter witnessed the events of this chapter in a dream. Nevertheless, this chapter steps outside the narrow perspective of most of the series thus far. And this is very appropriate, since this book marks a sudden shift to a much broader narrative scope.
Most of what this chapter accomplishes is a tantalizing foreshadowing of an ominous and mysterious kind. We know that Wormtail has rejoined his master, and that the Dark Lord is on his way to returning in the flesh. We know that torture, betrayal, and murder are on Voldemorts dance card, but he still hesitates to step out because of the vigilance of Dumbledore and the Ministry of Magic. We even get a gruesome hint about what You-Know-Who has in mind, when he tells Wormtail that many of his followers would give their right hand to be in Wormtails place.
Magic is certainly in this chapter, as well as tension, mystery, surprise, and sympathy (on Frank Bryces part). There is very little humor to hook us into the oncoming adventure, which is part and parcel with the fourth book's darker and more serious tone. This is no longer just a tale told to amuse the kiddies. There is serious and dangerous stuff looming ahead. And the terrifying bit that compels us to turn the page to Chapter Two is that Harry Potter, a kid we care about, is in the most serious danger of all.
Book Five, Chapter One: "Dudley Demented"
Once again, JKR hooks us into another new adventure with a first chapter full of shocks and surprises. In Order of the Phoenix it is a thrill to see that Harry is no mere passive victim, but a boy of action and power. It is also impressive to see the formula of Harrys summers with the Dursleys, separated from the world of magic, instantly shattered in such a dramatic way. Lest the predictable sequence of books (year five follows year four, yawn...) become tiresome, the author shakes things up right at the start.
Unfortunately and this criticism applies to the whole fifth book in general more editing would have done this chapter good. Some of the conversations in it go around in circles, and Harry himself is at an unappealing stage in growing up; the broader pace means more extensive scrutiny of his volatile emotional state, which soon becomes a bit obnoxious. This is more evident on a second reading, however. The first time through, the level of detail seems impressive, and helps to convince us of the surprising and unlikely events that take place.
What is more surprising and unlikely than Harry seeing Dudley, Petunia, and even Vernon in a more sympathetic light? What is more shocking than the signs of neglect and even outright hostility that Harry is picking up from the magical world, where he was (and still should be) widely admired? And what could be more unexpected than encountering a life-or-death climax in Chapter One; encountering fiendish, magical creatures in the neighborhood where the Dursleys live; and finding out that one of the neighbors is somehow connected with the wizarding world?
Besides all this surprise and tension that the chapter Dudley Demented generates, there is also a lot of humor. Yes, its back, people! From Harrys sarcastic answers to his aunt and uncle to his exchange of cutting remarks with Dudley (who, surprisingly, holds his own pretty well), right down to the batty appearance of Mrs. Figg whose chapter-ending words are so astonishing that they might make you laugh out loud, this chapter is as funny as it is scary. And even though the dementors have gone, they leave behind an earthshaking situation for the young hero, meaning that we just HAVE to turn to the next chapter and see what he does!
Book Six, The Book With Three Beginnings
The first chapter of Half-Blood Prince, titled The Other Minister, was reportedly based on an idea JKR had for opening one of the earlier books. It works nicely in Book Six, but at the same time, it has so little to do with what happens in the book that it might as easly be called a Prologue as a Chapter One. In a new way, Ms. Rowling creates a sense of the odd, non-geographic boundary between magic and the Muggle world, which can only be crossed by people from the magic side. She shows an educated, accomplished modern Muggle struggling to deal with the elementary principles of the magical world that intersects with his own. And it shows how the return of Lord Voldemort has grown into a crisis affecting both worlds, even so far as to change the formula that has held up until now (e.g., Cornelius Fudge is no longer the Minister for Magic). This reminds me of the first First Chapter of PS/SS, in which the First Voldemort Crisis has just passed.
Then comes Spinners End, which in a way is another prologue chapter, modeled perhaps on Book Fours The Riddle House. Ominous magic, dreadful portents of things to come for Harry, agonizing uncertainty about Snapes loyalty, and even a bit of black humor set up another mystery that will unfold inexorably as we turn every irresistable page that follows. Both of these first chapters have a mixture of mystery, horror, and humor, but this one brings it down to a much more personal level while The Other Minister paints it on the broad canvas of what is happening across Britain. We learn here that first Draco Malfoy, and then Snape as well, have a doom laid on them and if they want to live, somebody else has to die. Were too busy wondering how Snape is going to get out of his Unbreakable Vow to kill Harry to consider whether he intends to get out of it, or whether Harry is indeed the target. Its a brilliant feat of deception.
But it isnt until Chapter Three, Will and Wont, that Harry himself comes into the story. Once again, magic penetrates the Dursleys scrupulously magic-proof home, as Dumbledore finally confronts them face-to-face. Things seem to be back on the right footing between Harry and Dumbledore and the magical community in general though appearances can be deceiving. Lingering questions about whether Harry will return to Privet Drive and what will become of Grimmauld Place and its house-elf are (seemingly) answered, and the tension of the meeting of Dumbledore and the Dursleys finally propels Harry and his mentor out into the night and the adventure that it holds.
What we dont necessarily realize at this point is that Dumbledore is setting his household in order, as it were. My reading, and re-reading, of this chapter, picks up on hints suggesting that Dumbledore does not expect to see the final chapter. He is scrambling to make what arrangements he can before the need comes that he may not be able to supply.
Once again, I suspect that Book Six could have started very effectively with the chapter Will and Wont, and the few plot holes that would result could be easily patched up. However, I stand by JKRs decision to preface it with Spinners End, because it sets up a sense of dread foreboding and Will he or wont he guessing that thrums, like a high-tension wire, all the way through the book. Prefacing the preface with The Other Minister serves the narrative purpose of the opening shot of a movie in which the camera dolleys over the landscape and finally zooms in on, say, Harry Potters bedroom. The crisis is afoot. It has something to do with Snape and Draco Malfoy. And it has something to do with Harry and Dumbledore. What will it be? For the answer to that, you must turn to chapter four and beyond.
Every book has a beginning, but some beginnings are better than others. Without a good beginning, we might never reach the middle or the end. One of the most profound testimonies to J.K. Rowlings storytelling power is her virtually unerring ability to craft the right first chapter to lead us into each of her books. I can hardly stand to wait to read the first chapter of Book Seven. While there is much more to each of her books than you can find in their respective first chapters, you can tell by reading these first chapters that they are stories worth reading, and indeed, hardly possible to stop reading until the final chapter!
My next editorial for MuggleNet was a three-part piece titled "Found in Translation," published in February 2007. It originally included embedded photos illustrating items mentioned in the book that might be unfamiliar to American readers, because of differences in language and culture between the U.K. and the U.S. Unfortunately, during the site's transition from one type of server to another, all of the images were scrubbed and I frankly don't have time to put them back in. So let's consider these three installments the Lost Episodes and move on to...
A few people might have noticed, and wondered about, the fact that I didnt write a Book 7 Theories editorial before Deathly Hallows came out. There are two reasons for this. First, everyone and his house-elf was writing them. I figured mine would just be another drop in the ocean, so I decided not to bother. I like to be the first to do something different, rather than the 1,096th standing in line to do the same thing. (By the way, that was my number in the line at Borders the night DH was released.) Second reason: Any ordinarily clever person can prognosticate about a book that is yet to come. It takes an extraordinary genius to make predictions about something after it has already happened. And so, here are my theories about Book 7, after the fact:
Question: Was Snape a slimy git, or a hero? This was the topic of a debate at the live MuggleCast in St. Louis, which I attended. I even came to the microphone to explain my theory about this (mostly because my friend Amanda promised to buy me ice cream if I did so). My answer: Snape is a complex character. Its wonderful that in a series of what most people recognize as childrens books, there can be a character so complex and contradictory that debate about whether he was good or bad can go on endlessly. Both sides have points in their favor.
On the slimy-git side we have the fact that Snape is a pureblood supremacist. Even though he didnt mean to call Lily a mudblood, and suffered horribly as a result of letting that slip, the fact remains that those hurtful words came out of him, from inside. Lily herself rightly pointed out that, even if he didnt mean to call her a mudblood, that didnt stop him from slinging that word at other people. She also rightly judged Snapes Death Eater friends to be evil; and, as the proverb says: When the character of a man is not clear to you, look at his friends. Snape joined the forces of the evillest dark wizard of the 20th century, willingly (not, like Wormtail, out of mere cowardice). He only came over to the good guys side because of his tragic, perhaps even pathetically obsessive, love for Lily. I dont think his nastiness was an act. Even when he was bravely fighting and risking and sacrificing for the side of good (and, in the process, letting himself be thought of worse than he deserved), he remained a bitter, petty, meanspirited creep.
Snape had a cruel streak a mile wide, and I do believe he reserved a special dislike for Harry who, in so many ways, at least outwardly resembled his hated father James. Dumbledore had to remind Snape that Harry had Lilys eyes and also some of her soul; Dumbledore exploited these facts to make sure Snape was committed, against all his contrary inclinations, to keeping Harry alive and thereby, preserving the last surviving piece of Lily. I feel very sad for Snape, who finally had to live with the terrible knowledge that even that much of Lily must die to defeat You-Know-Who. And I am moved by his dying wish to look into the eyes of the boy who lived the boy he felt sure would not live much longer and breathe his last breath knowing what he had done it all for.
On the hero side, consider the double-life Snape had to lead. Trusted by no one, least of all those for whom he sacrificed the most, he courageously went to his death while everyone around him thought him a coward and a villain. Harry recognized Snapes heroism and named his gentler and sweeter son after him (Albus Severus). He had a tough life from start to finish. This does not excuse his bad decisions; but he turned back from them and tried to redeem himself. He did it seeking no recognition from anyone, and even (as it were) deliberately spiking any possibility that others would see the good in him. He seems like the kind of person who would have gotten angry at anyone who thanked him for doing something good, and who was intimidating enough to make this a real deterrent. Snape either had enough self-esteem to be self-sufficient, or enough self-loathing to keep himself humble. He lived a double life that he loathed, carried out Dumbledores plans even when they put him in terrifying danger and required him to do things he hated. It is no wonder he was bitter; think of the perpetual, ugly scowl on the face of the Leo DiCaprio character in The Departed for another example of what undercover work can do to a mans outlook on life.
Snape is, finally, a complex character. There can be no final answer to whether he was a good guy or a bad guy. This isn't a shades of gray cop out. Its rather like Sirius Blacks profound observation that the human race isnt divided between good people and death eaters. Umbridge, we finally learn in Book 7, is irredeemably wicked but not a death eater. Snape is neither irredeemably wicked nor, in the last analysis, a creature of the Dark Lord. But he is not nice, not sympathetic, nor altogether on one side or the other. Least of all is he for himself. But denying himself, he carried his tragic torch for Lily Potter and, in his own troubled and conflicted way, chose to give help rather than harm while pretending, until almost the end, to do the very opposite.
Question: Did Bellatrix Lestrange die or not? This also came up at the St. Louis Mugglecast. By then I had already had my turn at the mike, so I didn't get to air my brilliant theory about this. Consider: Bellatrix came from the same Black family that liked to behead house-elves and hang them on the wall. Consider: Bellatrix fell to Molly Weasleys curse in a way whose striking parallels to the death of Sirius Black J. K. R. clearly noted. Consider: The curse that pushed Sirius through the veil was a stunning spell. Therefore, my theory is that Molly Weasley did not kill Bellatrix outright; she stunned her and let the house-elves from the Hogwarts kitchens clean up the mess. I expect Bellatrixs head is mounted on a wall in the kitchens, over a bin full of rank-smelling potato peelings. Of course, I may be wrong. Bellatrixs survival could signal the beginning of a whole spin-off series, sort of like how Angel spun off from Buffy. Book 1: Wicked Witch on the Run...
Question: How could Ron speak Parseltongue? Again, the Mugglecasters debated this. What a silly question! What is Parseltongue but a language? Any language can be learned through study and imitation. Ron repeated what he had heard Harry say until it came out right. Its as simple as that. Harry was lucky enough to be born with the ability to speak the language fluently, a magical gift he shared with Tom Riddle because of that last-Horcrux thing. Thats bad juju. But being able to repeat High-awe-shaw-see-kheth in a strangled whisper isnt magic; its just a touch of linguistic cleverness. Ill bet you a double-dip of Florean Fortescues ice cream (if and when his shop reopens) that Harry and Ron go on, as aurors, to give everybody in their department Parseltongue lessons. At the very least, this would give them the investigative edge of being able to question snakes about occurrences that had no human witnesses.
Question: When do we see beyond the veil? At the June 28 MuggleCast, some people suggested that the ghosts of Remus, Sirius, James, and Lily came from beyond the veil though, for a moment, there was conflict about this because some people wondered how they could get from the veil (in the Department of Mysteries) to Harrys side (in the Forbidden Forest) so quickly. The answer that most people came up with at the time was: By magic! Which seemed to satisfy everyone for the moment. But I dont think the veil is really geographically limited to one room at the Ministry of Magic. If the Resurrection Stone can penetrate the veil of death, it can do so wherever it is.
And then the question was asked: If Harry's Kings Cross experience was beyond the veil, why didn't we see Sirius? Answer: Because Sirius had gone on. Which Harry could have done, in his personal version of beyond the veil what Dumbledore so charmingly referred to as your party by getting on a train and leaving the station. I think it is clear from these remarks that there is a place just beyond the veil of death from which a person can choose whether to go on (to what Dumbledore elsewhere spoke of as the next great adventure) or to come back as a ghost. We know that Sirius would not have done this; none of the dead from Harrys side would have. They would have gone on. And Harry would have, as well, except for the one thing about him that Dumbledore knew about and counted on: he would, and in his case could, go back to life and continue to fight Voldemort. Another thing I gathered from this last-ever Dumbledore Explains Everything scene, is that each persons vision of what this place beyond the veil looks like is unique to that person or, if not unique, at least shaped and visualized by that persons mind. That is why Dumbledore found Harrys choice of Kings Cross so interesting. One wonders what Voldemort saw when his last killing curse rebounded. One would rather not know, actually.
Question: Why were certain deaths, such as those of Tonks and Lupin, or (for example) Colin Creevey, really necessary? Answer: Its a battle, silly! The Battle of Hogwarts was the biggest conflict of its kind in the whole series. And it was a serious, life-or-death thing. With giants and acromantulas and who knows what else doing their worst, and Death Eaters firing blasting spells and killing curses into crowds of Hogwarts students, faculty, and their allies, there must surely be casualties; and some of them will be people one knows and cares about. Theres a certain symmetry about these two adult deaths, as well. Not only does it finish off the last of the Marauders, but it also creates a new, small orphan boy (Teddy Lupin) whose fate beginning with his upbringing will stand in rich contrast to that of Harry Potter. My only remaining question about this is: what is a 19-year-old boy doing snogging a Weasley cousin on the Hogwarts Express? Wouldn't he have left Hogwarts by then?
I should like to call for a moment of silence for each of the tragic deaths in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows...but there are so many of them that you would be scrolling downward until next Tuesday before you got to the next part of my article. I have been asked by a friend to point out that Hedwigs death was a real blow. We already knew that no one is safe, not even the children! But we werent prepared for the first significant death to be a faithful pet. Thank you, Hedwig, for taking a bullet from Harry. Alas, we hardly knew ye. As for me, my first tears in the book (not counting the scene in which Ron returned) were shed for Dobby. There is something very cleansing about the storys pause for a moment of tender grief at that point, something we had been denied on many another occasion. The other big tear-jerker, of course, was the Princes Tale. But part of every great battle a part that, to some degree, this book passed over is assessing the loss and adjusting to it emotionally. The fact that, ninteen years later, Harry and Ginny are giving their kids names like James, Lily, and Albus Severus testifies to the cost of victory that they are still bearing, but bearing well.
There are some scenes in this last book that will weigh on my mind for a long time. The ceiling in Luna Lovegood's bedroom was a touching image. Hearing word of Scrimgeour's death, only a chapter after he appeared alive, well, and belligerent, was a real shock. The Silver Doe scene was haunting, and what the Princes Tale revealed about it made my throat close up with emotion. But I doubt that any single scene from this book can top the horror Harry and Hermione encountered in Godric's Hollow: a singularly nightmarish scene that tops every chilling image in the series to that point. The filmmakers must not leave this scene on the cutting-room floor; but how they can possibly use something so terrifying in a movie aimed at youngsters is at the outer limit of imagination.
No, I am not going to write a skit about the conversation between the headmaster portraits of Snape and Dumbledore. My friend, who still owes me that ice-cream, suggested that I do so. Sorry, Amanda, but the Snape-Dumbledore riff was Jamies idea, not mine; and he has already made such a good start on it that I hope & expect he will finish it himself.
On the other hand, when the question came up about where the Dursleys went, the thought came to me: it would be cool to see a spin-off series, say, about the years between the Battle of Hogwarts and Harrys marriage to Ginny. Maybe, while waiting for her to finish at Hogwarts, Harry rooms with Dudley. It would be like the odd couple, only one of them would be really odd.
Or JKR could create a Melrose-Place-like spinoff series set at Grimmauld Place, with Kreacher living in the kitchen, Moaning Myrtle in the bathroom, Peeves in the parlor, and the Bloody Baron and the Grey Lady shacking up together upstairs. It could be titled One Afterlife To Live.